[請益] 句子修飾
請問板上高手以下兩句
"The influx of people, however controlled it is supposed to be, will bring
noise and litter."
可否改成 "the influx of people, which is however controlled as it should be
......"比較清楚???因前一句 controll, is, bring 有3個動詞卻無連接詞??
感覺怪怪...
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