[寫作] 幫我看一下這個造句
several nights,dreaming my father,as a giant,hanging an extremely huge fired
bomb with many little boys and girls,dancing and singing around him,ending up
by the exploded bomb with freash and boold from these children,I would waked
up abruptly in the nightmare.
我在想這樣的句子會不會太長.....
讀起來會很不舒服嗎?
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