[心得] 雅思心得 (寫作)

看板IELTS (IELTS雅思)作者vet33 (pluck up)時間12年前 (2014/04/22 05:10)推噓15(15推 0噓 2→)

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分享完最後一篇我就可以move on了! 對我來說寫作5.5到6.0的差別就是有沒有寫完基本上task1,2都寫完且字數有到的狀況應該都有6 6.0到6.5則是因為我對寫作題目更加了解可以針對不同題型寫作(我自己覺得) 寫作的部分其實我練習的不多之前家教老師常會催我寫但本人生性懶散所以好像也只有交過幾篇而已在準備寫作的過程中我覺得Simon的網站幫助真的很大我的作法是把上面有全文的部分下載印出來 task 1的部分就按不同圖型分類 task 2的部分則是按出題分式分類這樣一來就可以得到很多品質很好的文章一次以一個類別去分析該怎麼寫長久下來就可以歸納出自己的模板 Simon的文章都很簡單用字也不複雜他反覆提到考試時並不需要長難句或高深的單字如何把文章架構建立出來才是重要的 task 1 的部分如了地圖題跟流程圖其他line/bar/table/pie 都是要你描寫或比較數字會出現的方式則是數字本身或百分比架構方式完全是參考Simon 分四段 (1)Paraphrasing (2)Overview (3)Detail 1 (4)Detail 2 字彙代換的部分在閱讀Simon文章的時候我就會留意他怎麼使用然後偷偷筆記學起來像 compares...=shows information about...=shows the changes in the number of... between 1990 and 2000 = over a period of 10 years = over a 10 year period ~consumption = consumption of~ = the amount of ~consumed cost = expediture = spending = paid out population = the ration/porportion/percentage of people the (overall) number for = the (total) figure for the proportion of = the figure for ~is used for = ~ use 第二段overview只要選兩個重點來寫就好了如整體趨勢(上升下降或波動) 最大或最小值變化最多的地方三四段各挑出一兩個點比較寫出詳細的數字像誰跟誰差幾倍阿什麼東西上升了多少阿關於數字變化寫法我記得前面有位板友有PO很棒的整理請參考dodokoala的寫作分享開頭的部分則是可以用 It is cleart that... It is noticeable that... According to the (pie/line...) chart/graph,... We can see from the graph that... The graph shows that... As we can be seen form the data... Taking a closer look at the diagram,... What is worth noting is that... Task 2 根據題目類型可分成幾種 1.Opinion question:表達自己意見且給例子或證據支持這類型可以寫成一面倒(如果好寫的話) 題目問法是 To what extent do you agree or disadgree? Is this a postive or negtive development? 2.Discussion question:討論正反雙方不需表達意見 Discuss the adventages and disadvantages. What are the benefits and drawbacks? 3.Discussion + Opinion:討論雙方且表達意見 Discuss both views and give your opinion. Do the advantanges outweigh the disadvantages? 4.Problem & Solution /Cause & Effect 若題目有要求給意見的話一定要寫出來第一段開門見山就寫表明自己立場 (或部分同意這樣) 不然寫了一推people think是沒用的重點是你怎麼think啊! 我大概都寫四段 1.Introduction 題目引言加上立場(如果有要求) 2.Main paragraph 1 3.Main paragraph 2 4.Conclusion 重述立場 -Opinion question: 第一段就是題目引言改寫加上表明立場 (一面倒寫法) It is sometimes argued that...(題目) In my opinion, I complete agree/ disadree... - (同意) People have different views about ... Personally, I agree/support the view that... - (不同意) Many people argue that... However, I believe that... - (部分同意) To a certain extent, I agree that... However, I also believe that... - 第二段攻擊反方寫出為何反對第三段描述正方寫出為何同意接著總結再簡短說明一次立場二三段的架構若只有一個點子的話 Simon建議的寫法是 idea(topic sentance)-> explain -> example 但其實都會儘量想兩三個的點子所以我大多是寫 topic sentance -> Firstly,... -> example -> Secondly,... -> Finally,... 另一段不想重複就改成 The main reason (why I believe in ...is...) -> Also,...-> Furthermore,... 總結的部分之前我常會卡在這點子什麼的到這裡也用的差不多了實在擠不出東西來了後來發現只要把第一段換句話說就可以了不需要再加入新的東西進去簡單的寫一句 For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that...就行了 -Opition question 因為沒問意見就老實的寫他要的一正一反開頭一樣是兩句話改寫題目+本文要幹麻 While...has many benefits, there are also some drawbacks which are worth considering. I will compare and contrast these different approaches in this work. - Nowadays, many people take the option to..., while other perfer not to. In my essay, I will explore the good and bad points of of above attitudes. 第二段好處 One of the main benefits of...is... Another benefit of...is... 第三段壞處(或另一方立場) However, there are also drawbacks of.../arguments in favor of... One is that... Another drawback is... 第四段也是簡單一句 Overall, it can be said that...(這東西真是有好有壞/兩邊都很有道理呢!) In conclusion, there are conving arguments both for and against... -Discussion+Opnion 寫法也是兩個總和第一段改寫題目+表明立場因為這個有挑立場所以雖然兩邊都要寫我會先寫我反對的那邊比如說我覺得Z>B 我第二段會先寫B的立場 On the one hand,... 第三段反過來寫Z的立場 On the other hand,... 這樣第四段感覺比較順所以 Z>B這樣 In conclusion, it seems to me that ...is more significant than... In conclusion, I would argue thatthe benefits of...outweigh the drawbacks. -Problem/Solution or Cause/Effect 第一段改寫題目+Basic answer As...(題目), several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that... - ...(題目改寫)... There are various reasons for this, but measures could be taken to takle the problem. 第二段寫問題/原因第三段寫方法/影響 There are several actions that...could be take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be... A second measure would be... Finally,... 總結保持簡單 In conclusion, various measures can be taken to takle the problem that... - In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for..., and steps need to be taken to takle this problem. -- 終於寫完了其實我作文沒有很高拉還寫得頭頭是道好像很厲害一樣不過那些是我這段時間得到的心得就跟大家分享一下囉蒐集點子的部分其實Simon網站有分享很多關於各類題目的點子不需要用很難或很深刻的論點 (又不是在考GRE) 電子書的話我覺得跟網站的重覆率還蠻高的不過好處是他都幫你整理好了這樣有版友問我參考用書其實板上推薦過的書我都有買什麼北語黑眼睛盧紹梅20天慎小嶷口說跟寫作整套的雅思聖經... 但後來對我幫助最大的還是Simon+Leeds Mayi+Cambridge 6~9 其他的書只是買來擺心安的XD 最後如果有問題歡迎站內信或是讀英文讀得很痛苦想找人聊天也OK (我深深了解一直過不了的無力感) 這段時間我的精神支柱是漫畫"宇宙兄弟" 很適合追夢的人看祝大家都可以早日打敗雅思大魔王!! ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 128.180.156.98 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/IELTS/M.1398114623.A.FD6.html ※ 編輯: vet33 (64.121.178.251), 04/22/2014 10:05:30

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