[分享] 教你寫出雅思考官感動滿分作文
你知道「雅思寫作考官」要的是什麼嗎?
考試 = 談戀愛
你知道你的男/女友要的是什麼嗎？
花？錢？車子？房子？哀鳳？安全感？
全部都要!!!
請不要跟他/她分手!!!!!
不要放出來害人!!!
因此，再問你一次
你知道「雅思寫作考官」要的是什麼嗎?
考試 = 談戀愛
了解考官的要求 = 高分
1. Task Achievement
2. Coherence and Cohesion
3. Lexical Resource
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Task Achievement
This requires the students to accurately reflect the relevant information in
the graph. If you gave your answer to a stranger, would they be able to
accurately reproduce the graph? If they could, then you have fulfilled this
task.
http://i.imgur.com/cj7Pnxm.png
Coherence and Cohesion
This part of the marking criteria judges students’ ability to produce an
answer that is clear, fluent and easy to understand. Structure, appropriate
vocabulary and good grammar help to boost your score here. Good paragraphing
and appropriate use of cohesive devices can also be used to gain a higher
score.
http://i.imgur.com/AoWhMPU.png
Lexical Resource
This section is all about vocabulary and is often the most misunderstood. It
is NOT about inserting as many long words as you can think of. It is about
choosing relevant, appropriate and accurate words. You will help your score
here by using a variety of vocabulary and not simply copying the words in the
question.
http://i.imgur.com/HrVkjAs.png
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Obviously, you have to produce grammatically accurate sentences to do well in
this section, but it is also about using the appropriate structures. You are
expected to use different structures for describing numbers, trends and
making comparisons. The most common grammar mistake students make in IELTS
task 1 is not using articles and plurals properly.
http://i.imgur.com/l8QCqlL.png
我們來看看雅思寫作task 1最常出現的題型
曲線圖
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited
four different attractions in Brighton.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
http://i.imgur.com/GUCD6EC.png
最多同學犯的錯誤就是「把四條線個別地陳述出來」！
請問，你有看到題目中的要求嗎？
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
很重要，所以要講三次！
題目很清楚地要求考生要挑選出「最重要的特點」並且加以「比較」。但是，大部分的考
生通常只是分別把這四條線從1980到2010的變化陳述出來而已，即使用了很多正確的單字
來形容其變化，例如用了soar來表示急速上升，或是plunge表示急速下降。但是，因為並
沒有回答題目中的要求，即使單字句型使用得當，分數還是頂多6分，甚至6分以下。
因此，想要獲得高分，就必須回答問題；也就是要
「挑出重點」+ 「比較」
Line Graph***
我該寫什麼，怎麼寫？
A. Structure:
1. Introduction
a. 用5分鐘審題—看X/Y軸、單位、圖例、排列順序。
b. 第一段不出現數據
c. 現在式
d. 套句型 + 改寫題目
Given is /are the/one/two graph(s)
demonstrating
revealing
showing
highlighting
displaying
2. Describing the graph in detail
a. 過去式
b. 第一條線的最初發現 + 最低值 + 最高值 + (最後趨勢)
c. 第二條線的最初發現 + 最低值 + 最高值 + (最後趨勢)
d. 考官評分重點：Compare & Contrast
e. 用時間做主詞會有高分:
The past decade saw/witnessed a dramatic/moderate/gentle increase…
3. Conclusion
a. Repetition
b. Hidden characteristics
接下來，我們來看看一篇滿分範文吧！學習如何「回答問題」！
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited
four different attractions in Brighton.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
http://i.imgur.com/hoqKRwz.png
The graph provides breakdown information in terms of the percentage of
tourist attractions—Pavilion, Pier, Festival, and Art Gallery—from 1980 to
2010 over a-20 year period. Overall, the figure experienced an upward trend,
whereas only one figure showed a downward trend.
In 1980 and 2010, the favourite attractions were the festival, pavilion and
art gallery. The number of tourists to Festival fluctuated slightly but in
general remained steady at about 30%. However, there was a sharp increase in
visitors to the pavilion from 24% to 48% in 1995, followed by a slid to 31%
in 2010.
The trend for the art gallery resembles that of the pier. From 1980 to 1985,
the former climbed rapidly from 22% to 37, while the latter ascended from 10%
to 17%. This was followed by a plunge to 20% and 10% in 1990, respectively.
Then, the gap shrank hereafter at 15% until 2005, after which the number of
pier overshadowed that of art gallery, which became the least popular.
It is interesting to note that in 1980 the least popular attraction was the
pier, but in 2010 this changed, with the least popularity in the art gallery.
(204 words)
紅色：對比內容與句型。
藍色：加分句型。
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