[心得] 論文編修...
樓上剛好是論文編修的廣告文
今天又剛好口試通過
我把之前論文編修的經驗寫一下,希望對大家有幫助
我之前那篇paper是請華樂絲編修的
丟到Analytical Chemistry之後
一各reviwer建議可刊登,另一各卻打槍
最後,雖然被編輯打槍
但是,其中兩各Reviwers' comments
Reviwer 1
In terms of grammar and wording the manuscript is well written
and the experiments are easy to follow.
Reviwer 2
The paper was well written and may be suitable for publications
in Anal. Chem. after the following comments are addressed.
基本上,可以說是改的不錯
雖然大部分是時態的修改
但是,細部的部份有些用語會有比較好的改正
雖然用A可以,但是編修的人會建議用B
時態及用語的修改
修改前
We believe that the use of SALDI-TOF MS with the matrix of
gold nanoparticles has provided a new route.........
修改後
We maintain that the use of SALDI-TOF MS with the matrix of
gold nanoparticles provides a new route.........
Comment
Here the present tense is appropriate because you're
talking about the current state of research.
用語修改
修改前
Consequently, the color of the boiled solution........
修改後
Subsequently, the color of the boiling solution.........
Comment
Subsequently is more neutral. Consequently requires a strong
causal connection but if you're just describing events in time
Consequentlyuse subsequently.
其實,看過修改過後的稿子,也讓我學到很多寫作技巧
畢竟,有時候盲點自己是看不出來的
不過...
改這一篇好像花了6千多台幣
幸好實驗室出錢,不然有點心疼
祝大家都可以順利畢業
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