討論串[寫作班] 托福第39週 ikkk (3)
共 2 篇文章
首頁
上一頁
1
下一頁
尾頁

推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則,0人參與, 最新作者ikkk時間15年前 (2009/07/23 09:34), 編輯資訊
1
0
0
內容預覽:
I remembered that when I was a child, I was very attracted toward. living in a small town, such as Yilan country, Taiwan, because of no. air pollution
(還有1070個字)

推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)留言1則,0人參與, 最新作者excrement (the essence of love)時間15年前 (2009/07/29 17:16), 編輯資訊
0
0
0
內容預覽:
1. you need to pay attention to your sentences. many of your sentences are. either too long or lack of main verbs.. 2. it's a little bit short for a T
(還有1411個字)
首頁
上一頁
1
下一頁
尾頁