Re: [寫作班] 托福第28週 jarlinlove 1

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※ 引述《jarlinlove (永夜角聲悲自語)》之銘言： : 1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's : childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the : most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and : examples to support your answer. : ===================================================================== : Which period is critically determinative for a person’s personality? ---(a) (a) of : The answers may differ from childhood, adolescence, to adulthood. Generally ----(b) (b) lacks logical connection. There are something missing between the two sentences. : speaking, without grave changes in one’s life, we get accommodated to the : style of parents’ discipline, the physical and social environment, and form : a character distinct from others. Therefore, some say that childhood years ---------------------------------------(c) (c) this sentence should better be put after "The answers may...to adulthood." : are the most important years of one’s life. : Nevertheless, I don’t see eye to eye with the viewpoint. The first ------------(d) ---------------------------------(e)-------- (d) However / But (e) I do not agree with this idea. : reason is that according to psychology, people in the age are liable to mimic ------(f) ----------(g) -----------(h) (f) First is that, according to... (g) at this age (h) are likely to imitate adults : adults. They cannot distinguish true and false on their own, so they can just ---(i) (i) from : follow the steps of those who are considered to be the “models”. ----------(j) (j) "models." * The argument is plain, but acceptable. : Secondly, the life experiences for a child are still limited. Studies --------------------------------------------------(k) (k) children's life experiences are still limited : and tests play a main role in their daily lives. They don’t have enough -(l) (l) the : money and time to spend on things they are interested in. Without broadening : horizons, a person cannot contemplate what he or she really wants in life. -----------------------------------------------------------------------(m) (m) Without broadening their horizons, people cannot contemplate what they really want in life. * Still, between sentence "they don't..." and "Without...," there seems to be something missing. The sentences do not connect coherently. (But it's easier said than done. Ha, ha.) : Last but not least, people in childhood are still viewed premature in ------(n) -- (n) considered : average. They may have abundant knowledge even critical thinking, but the --------(o) (o) XXXXXXXXXXXXXX (delete it) : limited experiences confine them far from the social reality. : To sum up, owing to the three reasons mentioned above, people in : childhood years are still seeking and inquiring. What they experience in the : period of time are just referential resources for the future. Not until they ---------------------(p) (p) ?? : are ripe enough can they make decisions or take actions which absolutely ----(q) ---------------- (q) mature : essential to their lives. That’s why I disapprove of the argument. ----------------------(r) ----------------------------------------(s) (r) ?? (s) In this regard, I disagree that the childhood years are the most important period(s) of their lives. For your reference.^^ fleuve -- 然後有一天我ꄠ 靠在窗前，會發現原來我是株 ╭╮──╪──╭╮ 不＊ fleuve ＊需要陽光的植物︴1mK︴30m直到有一天我閉上眼睛 ╰╯──╪──╰╯ 看不見自己、卻可以看見你…ꄠ ♂ -- ※ 編輯: fleuve 來自: 118.168.35.70 (01/09 16:39)