[請益] 請各位老師們幫幫忙看一下文法對嗎？

看板CS_TEACHER (補教老師)作者crystaleey (我是我)時間11年前 (2014/04/02 01:13)推噓4(4推 0噓 5→)

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我是個安親老師，學生說要故事比賽要寫一個3分鐘說的完的故事，我能完成的只有這樣，不知道大家可以幫幫我看一下哪裡有錯嗎？非常謝謝大家！題目是how does it feel to wake up being a ....... One day, after I finished my homework,I went to bed. When I woke up again, I became a fox. What? Fox? Isn't me, oh no, I can't believe it. I was very scared. I didn't know why I change a fox. I left my bedroom,and lost on the street. When I walked across the road, I met a cat and asked him"Do you know who I am? "He answered me:" No, I have never seen you," I said:"I am Wendy, a beauty girl". The cat laughed at me and said:"you? If you were a girl, then I will be a handsome boy, hahaha! " I felt sad and left him. At this time, I met a parrot, "could you tell me how I changed back myself?" The parrot told me:" maybe you could find a smart lion that living in a forest." I walked into the forest and tried to find the lion, "where were you, Mr. Lion? ", What happened? A huge lion said. I said :"I wanted to know how could I changed back myself? " I asked you a question, if you can answer it correct, I will tell you or I will eat you. Who is the smartest animals? The lion asked. I was too nervous to talk anything. The lion was angry at me and prepared to eat me, this time, brring, it's seven o'clock, time to get up, I changed back myself, not a fox. It was a happy news. I hate I am a fox. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 61.62.105.58 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/CS_TEACHER/M.1396372439.A.8D8.html