[請益] 語句 表達意思 用辭是否有錯誤?

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (ynkd)時間14年前 (2010/03/18 13:35), 編輯推噓4(4014)
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我有一些問題想要請教~ I have some questions. 首先,公司在台灣初期 工程師 是否有細分? EX: 研發組, 製程組或者環境組等等。公司 要在內湖跟桃園蓋工廠,如果有規劃的話, ,工程師是都在一起 還是說內湖專門做研發而 桃園是量產的製程? In the initial stage of Taiwan's branch company development engineers have subdivided the department such as Research and Development, Process, Environmental and Safety, or etc.? The Company plant to building, including the Neihu Light Industry and the Taoyuan. If you have planned, then all engineers together, or R & D engineers work at the Neihu Light Industry and the Process engineers work at the Taoyuan? 第二, 成本的規劃EX: ( 1)人員方面的部份 (2)進料成本的部份.其中,以進料成本的部份 來說:EX:買入比較便宜的純度比較不足藥水, 公司投入少量的設備由工程師純化藥水? 鋅金屬的部分是否有更加便宜or品質穩定的供應商? Cost Planning: example, How to solve waste of human resources? How to solve the materials cost savings such as we buy the cheap electrolyte is not pure, and the Company invested a small amount of equipment then the engineer purified electrolyte? How to look for quality, stable and cheap, supplier of zinc metal? 三,假設,公司發展3年後,獲利不如預期,法人大量抽掉資金,or獲利不錯,不過法人需要回 收投資成本而抽掉資金,公司的部分是否有其他補救的措施? After three years, the company reaps the profit less expected and the investor wants to cancel the capital. Perhaps, the company reaps the profit as expected, but the investor wants to recover the capital. How to solve the problem? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 1.In the initial stage of Taiwan's branch ..... 2.R & D engineers work at the Neihu Light Industry 用at 還是 in ? work 好嗎? 3.Cost Planning: <--------可這樣用嗎? 4.we buy the cheap electrolyte is not pure, <----- is not pure 對嗎 5.How to look for.... <---- 可以這樣用嗎? 6.cancel the capital<----取消資金 對嗎? 7.recover the capital <-----回收資金 對嗎? -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 124.8.13.229

03/18 13:37, , 1F
The Company plan to build the factory, including the Neih
03/18 13:37, 1F

03/18 13:40, , 2F
還是 The company plans to include Neihu Light Industry
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03/18 13:41, , 3F
with the Taoyuan building the plant
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03/18 13:41, , 4F
大約掃瞄了一下 example, etc, how to ...,這些不太恰當
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03/18 13:43, , 5F
The company是特定一間 就用 plans 不然就是 Companies
03/18 13:43, 5F

03/18 13:45, , 6F
不要重複太多次的The company 可以用it or they
03/18 13:45, 6F

03/18 13:48, , 7F
可以的話 If you XXX非常不好 If we it he ...
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03/18 13:54, , 8F
how to如何改?
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03/18 13:55, , 9F
沒有主詞 誰去做了 這個動作 所以 放上主詞會比較好
03/18 13:55, 9F

03/18 13:58, , 10F
How your to solve waste of human resources? OK嗎
03/18 13:58, 10F

03/18 14:12, , 11F
看起來 你的文章 應該是講說 你們有在做 所以 我會寫
03/18 14:12, 11F

03/18 14:13, , 12F
we need to consider managing human resources. (2)...
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03/18 14:14, , 13F
這是我的看法 如果不好 可以請教 priv ^^
03/18 14:14, 13F

03/18 18:16, , 14F
想要先問一下background...否則不容易寫好
03/18 18:16, 14F

03/18 18:17, , 15F
就是..為什麼要問對方這些問題?審查投資案...?
03/18 18:17, 15F

03/18 18:31, , 16F
btw...4一定錯的
03/18 18:31, 16F

03/18 18:32, , 17F
只考慮文法的話可以加一個which,which is not pure
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03/19 00:08, , 18F
給對方的MAIL 應徵者的對答
03/19 00:08, 18F
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