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My English Writing Skills Are So Bad. My English writing skills are so bad. I can not use accurate words to convey the meanings which I want to convey in English writing. For example, I want to convey my feelings about "My idol and I were born both under the same astrological sign of the Crab." in English writing, so I have written a paragraph, "My idol and I have the same astrological sign, Cancer.". I think the meaning of this paragraph which I want to convey that is difficult to be understood. I used the phrase "have the same astrological sign, Cancer" to convey the meaning "born both under the astrological sign of the Crab" in this paragraph. The sentence structure is correct, but the meaning is weird and unclear. However, I seriously think there is no denying that I have to use more appropriate words to convey the meaning of each paragraph which I actually want to convey clearly in my English writing for improving my bad English writing skills. It looks a little bit weird, but I just can't express which part of it looks weird. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 202.132.210.135