i need come corrections~

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (lynch-mod)時間17年前 (2008/06/15 01:23), 編輯推噓2(204)
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here is my autobiography. anything improper, any mistake, plz let me know~ thanks a lot!!^^ I came from a medium well-off family. Since i was a child, I’ve traveled many countries with my humorous business man father, serious chinese teacher mother and my elder sister who works as an assistant of the judge. I’ve learned a lot of different accomplishments: english, recorder, dancing, swimming...etc. Though i’m not an expert in all of them, they gave me a coloful childhood. I went to the states for camping by myself when I was going into junior high school, which was an unforgettable experience and was the first time that I learned to take care of myself. I joined the choral society and the hot dance club when I was in Tainan First Girl’s Senior High School and in Kauhsiung Medical University, respectively. Both of them satisfied my passion about music and dancing. I even acted as the vice-president of the hot dance club, planning the glamour presentation and practicing dancing hard would be one of happiest things in my life. Besides, being the executive secretory of the biology student organization, a member of the public group of bio- camp and a member of the activity group of insect camp also brought me a lot of interesting and treasurable experiences. My character is more out-going and easy-going, most of the annoying things can be put away just with a cup of starbucks. The training of presentation in college and in graduate school got my attention, which to me is something that needs capabilities of organizing, logical thinking and expressing. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 124.8.15.74

06/15 17:30, , 1F
welcome aboard~ i love to sing a cappella
06/15 17:30, 1F

06/15 21:28, , 2F
i think dance club is just dance club, not "hot" =P
06/15 21:28, 2F

06/16 00:31, , 3F
and breaking up the descriptions of your parents
06/16 00:31, 3F

06/16 00:32, , 4F
into separate sentences would make it easier to
06/16 00:32, 4F

06/16 00:32, , 5F
read. ^^
06/16 00:32, 5F

06/22 00:50, , 6F
thx!!^^
06/22 00:50, 6F
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