A question about writing an offical E-mail...

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (Mr.Bug)時間16年前 (2009/09/28 18:10), 編輯推噓1(102)
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I want to send mail to elders, but I don't know how to write an offical E-mail. I hope someone can help me to rewrite the example below because I think the tone that I used is more like to peers, not elders! [Example 1] Dear AAA, My name is BBB, the son of CCC. My parent have a gift to you, therefore I would like to konow when is convience to you for a vist. [Example 2] Dear professor DDD, The attached files is the document you want, if you have any advisement, please let me know. ----------------- My English is not very well, so, if I make any mistakes, just say it! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.116.159.73

09/29 16:53, , 1F
For the third line of example 1,"therefore I would be
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09/29 16:54, , 2F
really appreciate if you would let me know when is
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09/29 16:56, , 3F
appropriate for me to visit you." (It's just an advice^^)
09/29 16:56, 3F
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