[Ask ] any problem with the sentence?

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (HP99999 MP99999)時間15年前 (2010/12/26 14:15), 編輯推噓0(008)
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any problem with the sentence? "A lack of experience writing in composition was many students' problems whom learn the English." -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.223.249.223

12/26 15:52, , 1F
Lack of experience in writing composition is the
12/26 15:52, 1F

12/26 15:53, , 2F
main problem for student who learn english
12/26 15:53, 2F

12/27 17:43, , 3F
"For English Learner, lacking writing experience
12/27 17:43, 3F

12/27 17:44, , 4F
on composition is the main problem." could this?
12/27 17:44, 4F

12/30 18:23, , 5F
I like Dino's version better, but I would use:
12/30 18:23, 5F

12/30 18:23, , 6F
...composition writing... for English learners.
12/30 18:23, 6F

01/14 23:04, , 7F
I thought the word "composition" already include the
01/14 23:04, 7F

01/14 23:05, , 8F
meaning of "writing something"
01/14 23:05, 8F
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