Re: [寫作] 請幫我看一下寫作文法或建議的(急用

看板GEPT (全民英檢)作者 (Rajagopal)時間15年前 (2010/05/03 15:24), 編輯推噓1(100)
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: In my free time ,I 'd like to go to the movies with my friends. Movies can I like to watch movies with my friends when I am free. : cure my soul and make me happier. If I was in a bad mood , I would like to : see an exciting movie to relax. If I was happy , I would go to a comedy to I prefer action movies if I am in a bad mood or simply want to do nothing but relax myself. On the other hand, a comedy would be my choice on the days when good things happen to me. : keep my mood . I think everybody need to relax after a busy day, find the way : we relax is a very important things in our life. : The most inspiring movie I saw was "the papillion" .It described the child's : innocence to look for the butterflies . In their way , we saw many : inspiration , such as mother's love ,caring and the warm. It also is a : ecological movie . The most inspiring movie that I have seen so far is "the papillon". .... ... -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 120.126.36.193

05/04 18:40, , 1F
謝謝指教^^
05/04 18:40, 1F
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