[家教] 線上教學英檢中高作文

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1.對象: 男 28歲 2.地點: 線上skype或Line 3.科目：英檢中高作文批改 4.上課時間：二天內交稿 5.時薪：作文每篇400~500元約有5篇 6.條件：希望改的能像以下範例清晰明瞭 -------------------範例--------------------------------------- Teaching other people how to get some skills or learn about new things is a very : interesting thing. 1. teach 某人 to 做某事雖然文法沒錯，　可是這個to模稜兩可：　可能是「教別人獲得新技能」，　也可能是「我為了獲得新技能才教別人」。　因此我插個how進來。 2. thing 是個非常空洞的字，用太多只會凸顯自己字彙量不足。　"XXX is an interesting thing" 不如直接寫"XXX is interesting." 　你 some skills 的 some 也很空洞。 3. 你這句主詞超長的，英文不喜歡虎頭蛇尾的句子，　建議用虛主詞it改寫，如： It is interesting to teach people new skills and knowledge. ----------------------------------------------------------- 試改文請挑三句以上試改寄到我的gmail 這篇是去年的中高考題印象中是在講是否受過更多教育可以得到更多機會並舉例 Whether people receive higher education get more opportunities is a great issue in today's society. In my view, I don't think this theory is right and the followings are my reason. One reason is that people have their strengths and advantages, but not only in academic. People's academic achievement cannot represent their career path. The other reason is I know that many people who receive higher education cannot figure out what the job they want to do. As for me, I was not good at studying. After graduating from college, I didn't choose to enter a graduate school but did the job of the salesperson in a car dealer until now. In my company, I found that I have a talent to convince customers to buy expensive cars. After one year, I was promoted to a sales manager and received a lot of chances to go our branches company in American to learn more about management skills and take a series of training. I hope that one day I can have my own business, and I think my achievement will not be less than those whose degree is higher than me. 7.聯絡方式： 8.附註：英文系所畢業全民英檢中高級雅思7.5以上程度 ---- 如使用者對於本篇文章想回覆者，請記得按M，回覆至作者信箱。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.160.54.95 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/HomeTeach/M.1548743257.A.2CB.html ※ 編輯: jt910203 (1.160.54.95), 01/29/2019 14:29:25

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