[問題] 關於寫作的問題

看板IELTS (IELTS雅思)作者 (也許‧‧‧這樣最好)時間12年前 (2014/04/13 23:06), 編輯推噓4(4018)
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我想問一下這個寫作題目 computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree? 想問一下大家會怎麼寫 1.Introduction 2.同意/不同意鼓勵在家工作 3.同意/不同意鼓勵在家工作 4.Conclusion 還是我應該把題目拆成兩個部分(computers and... everyday一個部分, working from home...employers是第二個部分) 然後一段先討論我同不同意電腦等科技讓員工可以在家工作 然後再一段討論我同不同意在家工作應該要被鼓勵 希望大家看得懂我的問題 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.34.163.219 ※ 文章網址: http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/IELTS/M.1397401566.A.669.html

04/13 23:14, , 1F
重點是問work from home是不是該被鼓勵/推廣,我會寫ma
04/13 23:14, 1F

04/13 23:14, , 2F
in idea,好壞處,然後寫同意/不同意,結論
04/13 23:14, 2F

04/14 00:22, , 3F
第一段只要換句話說然後放在intro並加入你同意不同意的原
04/14 00:22, 3F

04/14 00:22, , 4F
因,二三段主題分別展開說明你同意不同意的原因並舉例,
04/14 00:22, 4F

04/14 00:22, , 5F
第三段記得小提一下反方意見但還是要拉回來自己論點 最
04/14 00:22, 5F

04/14 00:22, , 6F
後endding
04/14 00:22, 6F

04/14 01:00, , 7F
那假設我同意 那是不是兩段都要寫我同意的原因?
04/14 01:00, 7F

04/14 01:02, , 8F
像sunycat版友說的小提一下反方即可
04/14 01:02, 8F

04/14 01:07, , 9F
http://ppt.cc/Snug 可是看完simon這篇 為什麼我感覺
04/14 01:07, 9F

04/14 01:08, , 10F
要寫兩個部分?? 有錯請指正我吧!! 我困惑了
04/14 01:08, 10F

04/14 04:12, , 11F
我覺得看題目要很小心“should be"是關鍵字 題目第一段是
04/14 04:12, 11F

04/14 04:12, , 12F
陳述事實(我覺得改寫就好), 第二段有should be的才是
04/14 04:12, 12F

04/14 04:12, , 13F
你要去論述同意不同意的重點 。當然我覺得你找個老師或
04/14 04:12, 13F

04/14 04:12, , 14F
考官老師問一下意見比較好 這我個人淺見啦^^加油
04/14 04:12, 14F

04/14 17:00, , 15F
我剛剛問了考官,他給了一個可用的架構,我不會用控碼
04/14 17:00, 15F

04/14 17:01, , 16F
就打在blog裡面>"< 如有不妥請告知http://ppt.cc/x~yE
04/14 17:01, 16F

04/14 22:01, , 17F
請問work from home和work at home有何區別?
04/14 22:01, 17F

04/15 13:09, , 18F
謝謝你的幫忙!!
04/15 13:09, 18F

04/17 19:20, , 19F
Working FROM home = telecommuting
04/17 19:20, 19F

04/17 19:21, , 20F
implies you are still in contact with the office
04/17 19:21, 20F

04/17 19:22, , 21F
Working AT home=more general,any kind of work done
04/17 19:22, 21F

04/17 19:23, , 22F
at home
04/17 19:23, 22F
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