[問題] 屆滿三個月即將離職的離職信求批

看板Salary (工作職場)作者 (螃蟹)時間11年前 (2015/06/18 16:19), 編輯推噓6(6023)
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小弟年初準備跳槽 同時面試了兩間外商 A公司: 待遇福利佳也可以回鄉工作 與原工作領域稍有差異 => 生產機具商 B公司: 福利待遇更更佳 而且可以繼續從事相關產業 最想要這間 不過是外派 => 檢驗商 第一階段A馬上就通知我年後上班 B發無聲卡沒回應 所以我在年前就答應了A預計三月底上班(註:三個月試用期) 直到三月中B才問我能不能第二階段面試 我才又抱著試試的心態面試了B(已準備去A公司上班了) 面試完又發了無聲卡長達兩個月 我也心安的在A公司進行了受訓、經手一些案子 沒想到B在六月初通知我進行最後一階段面試 隔一禮拜後 面試結果是聘用! 終於呀...... 問題來了 就是希望從A公司走的好看一點= = 因為現在公司超忙 我又突然試用期滿就要離職......雖依法規無須預告 但很在意業界給我的評論 我個人也很在意這種正式的書信 寫了封離職信 預計這三天假期時寄出 希望有板上的前輩能用力給批 看有哪些廢話可以刪掉...... 或是可以補充說明什麼 當然最後一定是會在下周上班日時當面談 先感謝各位板友了! Dear XXX I'm sorry to inform you that I decided to resign from my current position as a xxxxxx engineer at A company because there's another offer for me as a xxxxx surveyor at B company and I will accept this offer. Hope you could understand even though we are undertaking such a heavy workload. I have interview with "A" almost at the same time with "B" in Jan. 2015 but they finally making an unofficially offer by email for me until last week then they need more days for working out a formal contract for me about this new job. Please advise when shall I leave for it or kindly consider my decision which is to resign at 6/24 for finishing my 3-months probation period and complete the rest of my work which needs to handover. Thank you for providing this opportunity as a xxxxxx engineer and all the training plan for me with plenty learning source at hand. It's a great time working with all "A" colleagues and I really appreciate all of your help during these days. Farewell and thank you. Best Regards, Realtek8139 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 220.136.111.23 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1434615555.A.C3B.html

06/18 17:00, , 1F
看帳號還以為是瑞昱的人 其實內文講到這樣就不錯了吧
06/18 17:00, 1F

06/18 17:01, , 2F
不需要多講了 畢竟想要的公司是再另一邊 這邊至少有告知
06/18 17:01, 2F

06/18 17:10, , 3F
看那麼多離職同事頂多寫farewell跟留聯絡方式
06/18 17:10, 3F

06/18 17:10, , 4F
連要去哪都交待那麼清楚? 不怕有心人靠關係在B公司搞你?
06/18 17:10, 4F

06/18 17:11, , 5F
寫個因為生涯規劃怎樣的就好了, 寫這麼清原公司要留你早
06/18 17:11, 5F

06/18 17:11, , 6F
留了, 也不會等你要走才要加薪或職務異動
06/18 17:11, 6F

06/18 17:21, , 7F
建議不用交代的那麼詳細
06/18 17:21, 7F

06/18 17:22, , 8F
寫的很好 只是覺得不必跟A說你跟B的歷史淵源
06/18 17:22, 8F

06/18 17:48, , 9F
你要離職當面說就好了 部用說那麼多啦
06/18 17:48, 9F

06/18 19:47, , 10F
吃飽太閒???
06/18 19:47, 10F

06/18 19:49, , 11F
想太多了, 離職就離職, 事情交接清楚就好了.
06/18 19:49, 11F

06/18 21:53, , 12F
完了 我看不懂
06/18 21:53, 12F

06/18 23:24, , 13F
感謝各位板友給的建議 真是突破我的盲點
06/18 23:24, 13F

06/18 23:25, , 14F
一直想說要好好給個交代 現在仔細一看真的講太多
06/18 23:25, 14F

06/18 23:27, , 15F
應該會極簡化第一段來修正 反正橫豎A都要失望了…不
06/18 23:27, 15F

06/18 23:27, , 16F
如就乾脆一點
06/18 23:27, 16F

06/18 23:28, , 17F
如果主管真想瞭解就選擇星期一電話詳談這樣
06/18 23:28, 17F

06/18 23:28, , 18F
其實當初會想鉅細靡遺是因為主管只能用email跟電話
06/18 23:28, 18F

06/18 23:28, , 19F
談…
06/18 23:28, 19F

06/18 23:35, , 20F
寫的是很好...但也真的不建議寫這麼多...你去另一間公司
06/18 23:35, 20F

06/18 23:36, , 21F
就是有新的人生規劃...就跟他說個各人生涯規劃吧...
06/18 23:36, 21F

06/18 23:36, , 22F
假如在你新公司onboard之前...可以幫忙就幫忙盡量交接
06/18 23:36, 22F

06/18 23:36, , 23F
但一切還是以新公司為主...
06/18 23:36, 23F

06/19 01:38, , 24F
比較好奇B公司是怎麼回事= =
06/19 01:38, 24F

06/19 05:07, , 25F
b公司要文件審核一層一層過很多關
06/19 05:07, 25F

06/19 05:08, , 26F
先從香港hr 提到亞洲區上海分公司
06/19 05:08, 26F

06/19 05:08, , 27F
再從上海提回總公司 總面試時間拖了半年
06/19 05:08, 27F

06/19 07:59, , 28F
只要提到自己要離職、感謝大家的照顧、大家辛苦了 就可
06/19 07:59, 28F

06/19 07:59, , 29F
以了
06/19 07:59, 29F
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