[請益] 請大家對我的整合寫作的模板給些建議!

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者 (pete)時間16年前 (2009/12/16 20:28), 編輯推噓5(505)
留言10則, 8人參與, 最新討論串1/1
According to the passage, the author proposed several reasons on XXXXXX However, the speaker in the lecture holds a totally opposite attitude to the contents of passage. The following will show how they disagree on the issue. First, What's more, In addition, To sum up, the author holds complete confidence on XXXXXXXXXXXX the speaker cast doubt on it based on the research she found on YYYYYYYY They obviously have disagrements over the issue. 這是我三年前用的模板 不知道能否給我一些建議?? 有沒有哪裡需要再做改進的??? 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.37.57.111 ※ 編輯: peter308 來自: 114.37.57.111 (12/16 20:34)

12/16 20:37, , 1F
為什麼我怎麼看都覺得這像整合寫作模板?
12/16 20:37, 1F
不好意思~~ 標題打錯

12/16 20:41, , 2F
如果以GMAT標準語法來看 第一句修辭不佳
12/16 20:41, 2F

12/16 20:42, , 3F
According to 後面的S不能放人吧
12/16 20:42, 3F

12/16 20:42, , 4F
沒記錯的話啦 因為很久以前考的了 有點忘了
12/16 20:42, 4F
※ 編輯: peter308 來自: 114.37.57.111 (12/16 21:25)

12/16 22:29, , 5F
According to後接某個權威人士or資訊來源
12/16 22:29, 5F

12/17 00:38, , 6F
好像不能接"自己"的意見或想法
12/17 00:38, 6F

12/17 09:18, , 7F
這似乎是整合寫作的模板耶,你要再查清楚喔!
12/17 09:18, 7F

12/17 09:32, , 8F
謝謝各位板友的建言~~~
12/17 09:32, 8F

12/17 10:35, , 9F
給個小意見 與其寫結論 不如把聽到敘述更詳細
12/17 10:35, 9F

12/17 13:29, , 10F
推樓上,把聽與讀中給的點都寫出來比較,字數再衝多一點
12/17 13:29, 10F
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