[請益]請問這個文法正確嗎

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者 (yume)時間15年前 (2010/10/15 19:31), 編輯推噓1(103)
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正在寫TPO的整合題 每次寫都會有個小煩惱 就是不知道可不可以用連接詞一直接下去寫???? 也就是Although第一句,第二句.thus making it..... 這樣可以嗎????? 我這樣寫文法會不會錯 Though,the article states that the talk took place years before Chevalier wrote the memoir, making it impossible to remember every single world precisely, the professor indicates that Chevalier had used to write journals and notes, thus he can refer to the resources he had recorded several years ago. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.218.194

10/15 21:04, , 1F
連接詞當然可以一直寫下去,但thus不是連詞,前面要改成分號
10/15 21:04, 1F

10/15 23:22, , 2F
Though 旁邊不要逗點;impossible for 人 to V;
10/15 23:22, 2F

10/15 23:22, , 3F
沒有 had used to 的用法;single WORD;
10/15 23:22, 3F

10/16 12:08, , 4F
超感謝大家!!!!!!!!一直沒有人幫我改 沒想到錯誤這麼多
10/16 12:08, 4F
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