[請益] 托福作文可以這樣寫嗎? "很多的you"

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者 (追夢)時間12年前 (2013/07/13 21:00), 編輯推噓5(502)
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when you are assigned an important presentation for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day, or wait until you have a good idea about presentation? 我有一段落這樣寫: Working on the assignment right away has another benefit. More often than not there would be some interruption happening beyond your expectation. In other words, you cannot always expect that the preparation for the assignmen could be followed in order. Have you ever received an email titled similar to "Urgent task, please do it as soon as possible?" I do receive a variety of these kinds of urgent tasks quite often. You cannot expect that your boss would be considerate enough to think about how many pressing or critical tasks are already on your hand. All your boss wants you to accomplish is to rush through his or her task immediately. Therefore, don't be so confident that you can complete the assignment in just a couple of days and tackle it later accordingly. Too many interruptions coming later on would simply drive you crazy. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.61.28.164

07/14 10:54, , 1F
改成I如何?
07/14 10:54, 1F

07/14 13:32, , 2F
改成we可能會好一點吧
07/14 13:32, 2F

07/14 16:53, , 3F
同意 改成we, I, one,individuals,those../you不妥
07/14 16:53, 3F

07/14 16:57, , 4F
題目問你的意見你卻一直反問rater,若只是闡述一個想
07/14 16:57, 4F

07/14 16:58, , 5F
法乾脆用people,those,one,之類的字,且還能互相代換
07/14 16:58, 5F

07/16 09:25, , 6F
assignment 打錯囉
07/16 09:25, 6F

07/16 09:27, , 7F
改成us吧
07/16 09:27, 7F
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