[請益] 綜合寫作是否需提到文章內容

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綜合寫作主要是老師反駁文章提到的內容請問寫作時能不能只提到老師反駁的點而不提到文章的敘述以TPO34的綜合寫作為例 The professor in the lecture is discussing three theories of the extinction of sea cows. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage. He believes that none of the three theories is correct. The first reason why the professor is skeptical about the reading passage is because of the too much hunting theory. He mentions that sea cows were massive creatures, which could support a large number of Siberian population. Hence, Siberian people were not necessary to hunt all of them. Consequently, the professor concludes that the overhunting theory is implausible. Second, the lecturer refutes the points in the reading article by mentioning ecosystem disturbances hypothesis. He claims that if this disturbances did give rise to the extinction of sea cows, it would definitely affect other part of ecosystem such as whales. However, no report demonstrated the decline of whales. Accordingly, the lecturer holds that the ecosystem disturbances hypothesis is unsupported. The third reason why the speaker in the lecture challenges the reading is related to the fur traders explanation. He notes that the population of sea cows was already quite small before the European arrived. In other words, European fur traders were not the factor which resulted in the decline of sea cows. Therefore, the speaker maintains that the fur traders explanation is unconvincing. Finally, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on the points in the reading passage. He is firmly convinced that all of the three theories in the reading are flawed. 我整篇文章只提到作者攻擊的點而未提到文章所提及的內容請問這樣是否適當還是必須要一句提到文章觀點一句提到教授觀點例如: it is pointed out in the passage that................, while the professor claims that............ 謝謝各位 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 163.26.36.158 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/TOEFL_iBT/M.1462275353.A.868.html