[說寫] 有高手可以幫忙分析這兩句的句構嗎? 謝謝

看板TOEIC (TOEIC多益)作者 (Ping-Pong)時間14年前 (2011/09/22 00:22), 編輯推噓1(1011)
留言12則, 4人參與, 最新討論串1/1
這是我組員寫的句子 她給我看, 我覺得錯很多 結果不相信我就算了, 還罵我!!! 她只看專業人士的意見>< 下面是原本她寫的, 我改得她都不相信.所以放上來希望有很詳細的答案@@ 因為我會改 但是說不出為什麼@@ (我的國貿成績啊~~~~~~~~) 感激不盡><""" 1. Recently, European begin trying to get used to drink tea instead of daily coffees, becasue most want to realise more chinese cultures than before, for doing business or for health. 2. We focus on selling tea products, generated mainly in Taiwan but seldom in china to Europe, providing different types and qualities of the tea such as green , black or herbs. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.24.58.110

09/22 00:30, , 1F
我好難過==
09/22 00:30, 1F

09/22 08:58, , 2F
European began trying ->已經開始了吧?
09/22 08:58, 2F

09/22 09:01, , 3F
get used to drinking
09/22 09:01, 3F

09/22 09:03, , 4F
most of them ->會比較清楚
09/22 09:03, 4F

09/22 09:06, , 5F
products" "generated mainly 應該不用逗點
09/22 09:06, 5F

09/22 09:07, , 6F
in "C"hina to Europe 這裡的意思我看不懂,sorry
09/22 09:07, 6F

09/22 17:53, , 7F
既然他只相信專業人士,您在這兒問其實沒用。
09/22 17:53, 7F

09/22 17:54, , 8F
直接問您們的授課教師或她信的人才有用!
09/22 17:54, 8F

09/22 17:55, , 9F
而且既然您有您的看法,先PO上您自己的想法再討論,
09/22 17:55, 9F

09/22 17:56, , 10F
才學得到東西,不然等於變相請網友幫您們改(作業)
09/22 17:56, 10F

09/22 20:50, , 11F
後來這就不是作業了~~~ 謝謝大家
09/22 20:50, 11F

12/02 20:28, , 12F
才學得到東西,不然等於 https://noxiv.com
12/02 20:28, 12F
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