[請問] 自傳英文一問已回收
During school period , I learned the ability to work independent and get good
grades . My favorite course is maths and physics , and participate in many
competitions ,that help me be excellent at logic thinking . I graduated from
xxxx and my major was in xxxx . That time with classmates
and college activities widen my field of vision , increases my expierence for
team-work . I also take economics as an elective course , its helpful to
understanding the commecial market for me .
請問版上各位 english is good 大大
這是我用所學跟字典翻的自傳其中一段 > <
大意是講 :
求學期間,學會獨立並取得好成績。最喜歡的科目是數理,並參加許多競賽。
這使我我在邏輯思考上有不錯的表現。畢業於xxx,xxx系,與同學相處跟社團活動
開拓了我的視野並增進我團隊工作的經驗。並且選修經濟學,對我了解商業市場有幫助。
請問文法跟用詞上有沒有要改進的地方
感激不盡
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