Re: [請益] 政大97年作文

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※ 引述《avene0510 (....)》之銘言： : 題目: : How people Respond to fear : 請寫出300字英文作文 : 不知道大家都會怎寫呢? : 可以給各大方向嗎? : 謝謝! Below is the English composition structure: Officially, there always are 3 or 5 paragraphs in an essay. I. Introduction -Hook:Put in the very first part of a composition to draw reader's attention. Usually expressed with questions or quotations. -Content -Thesis statement: A sentence contains the outline of Body part. ex: I think___,because of A,B and C. II. Body i. Explain A,Reason,examples ii. Explain B,Reason,examples iii. Explain C,Reason,examples III. Conclusion -Integrated opinions. -------------------------------------------------------------------- "How people respond to fear" Have you ever confronted the situations that fear you? I think it's a common negative emotions that human beings always try to solve. In my opinion,the right attitude we should take is finding the root of fear, striving all efforts to find solutions, and learning to adapt to the conditions when there's no way to solve it. If we know the basis of our fear, then we could have brainstorming the best solution to it. For instance, I was afraid of approaching water in my childhood,due to once upon a time I ever drowned in the swimming pool. Eventually I became good at swimming, water is not the root of my fear anymore. I got the braveness to conquer my fear, as you can in the future. Sometimes we know the causes of our fear, but we are incapable to overcome the obstacles. Potential as we are, we definitely own the chances to solve it, depends on how hard we try. Keep working,keep trying, nothing impossible to our ability. Hard situations always exist around us. If solveless, we should prepare our mind to think a healthy way and ready to welcome a better tomorrow. Various of methods to solve our fear, choose a way that meets your need. At times,others can offer you help, but the keypoint is yourself. Do you face fear with positive attitude? It's a very important issue for you to ponder. --------------------------------------------------------------------- 作文可以架構嚴謹,亦可不落俗套,端看筆者喜好的呈現方式... 我不會說自己這篇是在獻醜,因為我所受的教育使然,分享諸位聞香一番... :) -- If you happy happy happy clap your hand～ If you happy happy happy clap your hand～ If you happy happy happy,If you happy happy happy,If you happy happy happy CLAP YOUR HAND~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 125.226.25.109

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Rain2207

02/28 19:43, , 1^F

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shiyachan

02/28 19:58, , 2^F

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Thanks for reminding. Originally I suggested that there must be some diversity between noun and verb of "fear". It seemed that I am too naive and lack of acquirements. Gotta study! XD ※ 編輯: scream7 來自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:07)

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shiyachan

02/28 20:00, , 3^F

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小的斗膽一提,bravery是大概念性的名詞,草民敘述個人小感覺使用小概念名詞就夠了(?) 舉例來說: jewel 指稱寶石首飾 jewelry 總稱寶石何人敢口出狂言誇稱自己買了jewelry(所有寶石的總稱)? XDXDDDDD ※ 編輯: scream7 來自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:12)