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Here is 鎮瀾宮. 鎮瀾 means “control the wave” and there is a Mazu statue tue inside. Mazu is the sea god. She can control the sea. Because Dajia is beside the sea, so there is a lot of fisher and they pray for their safety. Today, there are numberless people who believe Mazu in the world. Many people come here for praying everything they want, just like business, love, health, money, etc… If their wish comes true, they will give a gold metal as a present for thanksgiving. The temple gets a lot of gold metals every year. They decides melted all the gold metals, manufactured a golden Mazu in 2005. The golden Mazu is in the temple’s basement. It is worth one hundred thirty million dollars before, but now it is worth two hundred eighty million dollars. The Mazu patrol to the 雲林北港朝天宮 after lunar calendar January 15th every year. The date is not fixed. There will have a lot of culture activities before the patrol, and the follower will prepare food for the disciples who follow the Mazu in the way. All the food is free. The activities let us discover enthusiasm and friendly in Taiwan. 請問這段介紹大甲鎮瀾宮的文章是否通順,或者是有什麼介紹建議再加上去的? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.125.91.12
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