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Topic:
If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would
you go? Why?
People are always dreaming about travel through time. And if I could go back
to some time and place in the past, when and here would I go? I think if I
could travel through time, I would like to go to South Africa in 1995.
The reason why I wanted to go to South Africa in 1995 is that I had so much
fun there. My family lived in South Africa for a couple of years because of
my father’s job. I made a lot of friends their, and often go out to play
with them. Unlike the children in Taiwan I think children there are much
happier. Children there don’t have a lot of pressure from school, and can
join clubs to have fun after school. I joined the art club and the drama
club, and had a lot of fun.
The second reason is that I think South Africa is a beautiful place. There
are lots of beautiful wild animals out there. My parents once took me to the
Kroger National Park and I still remembered clearly in my mind. We saw lots
of animals. We saw a crowd of lions and cubs walk beside our jeep, we saw
cheetah lying under the tree, and we saw springbok drinking water from the
dam. It is so amazing to see the wild animals are right beside you. And at
that moment, you will feel that this world is so wonderful.
The third reason is that the rugby world cup was held in South Africa in
1995. That year South Africa won the champion cup. I still remember how
people were crazy about the rugby world cup. The final game was between South
Africa and New Zealand. Everyone was excited and everyone was talking about
it. The captain, Francios Pienaar even became a hero. Even foreigners like my
family watched the game on TV. If I could go back then, I could feel the
excitement one more time. Or maybe go and watch the game live.
Considering all the above, it is apparent that if I could travel through
time, I would like to go to South Africa in 1995.
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