[請益] 可以幫我看一下這樣寫有沒有錯

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (抗暖化從自己做起)時間15年前 (2010/05/12 13:10), 編輯推噓4(402)
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老師出了一項作業 希望我們打電話申訴一些環境污染之類的問題 (比方工廠排放廢水或是餐廳未做好回收工作) 請幫我看一下底下的對話有沒有問題...謝謝 Good morning. My name is Grace Pan. I'm calling to report a problem. When I go jogging, I find some dog's poo on the street. I have to watch my step. It's located outside 326 Mathilda. Could you do someyhing about this problem? Thank you very much. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 71.102.236.149

05/12 15:17, , 1F
第2句改過去式
05/12 15:17, 1F

05/12 15:27, , 2F
You're very polite.
05/12 15:27, 2F

05/12 15:28, , 3F
請問是改成When I went jogging, I found some dog's poo
05/12 15:28, 3F

05/12 15:29, , 4F
on the street. 這樣改對嗎?
05/12 15:29, 4F

05/12 15:39, , 5F
嗯 第三句也改過去式好了
05/12 15:39, 5F

05/12 16:25, , 6F
推~你太客氣了...XD...
05/12 16:25, 6F
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