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中文：流浪動物(Stray Animals)
今天我要講的內容是有關於流浪動物。
我想在座的各位或多或少，應該都有過養寵物的經驗。
我是很喜歡動物的人，每次看見路邊髒兮兮、瘦巴巴的流浪貓、狗時，心裡都很難過。
每次都會想那些飼主到底是抱著怎麼樣的心態去拋棄那些可憐的動物。
貓咪、狗狗，在他們還小的時候都非常的可愛，都會得到主人的寵愛；
但等他們漸漸長大，不再可愛了，有些可惡的人就會因為種種亂七八糟的原因，
而把他們丟棄，完全沒有考慮到寵物們在外面的世界要如何生存下去。
我的家裡因為沒有足夠的空間可以好好的讓寵物生活，也沒有多餘的時間可以陪伴他，
所以儘管我真的很喜歡動物，卻並沒有飼養寵物，因為不想讓他受苦。
我覺得如果真的要養動物，就要下定決心好好的照顧他，不要因為私人的種種理由，
而讓寵物們過著痛苦的生活。
自譯：
Today my topic is 〝Stray Animals〞.
I think all of you must have seen the stray animals on the street.
I’m the kind of person who loves animals very much.
Every time when I saw the dirty、thin stray cats or stray dogs on the street,
I was sad and angry. Icouldn’t imagine what kind of people would abandon
these poor and innocent creatures.
Everyone might probably have pet once. We all know that kitties and poppies
are very cute and sweet when they are still babies. But when they grow up,
and not that cute anymore, some people would throw them away, just because of
some selfish and ridiculous reasons. They don't even think about how their
pets could survive in the outside world.
I don’t have enough time and space for the animals, even though I do love
animals very much, I still don’t have one because I don’t want them always
being lonely.
I think if you decide to have pets, then you must make up your mind to take
care of them. Do not abandon them just for some small reasons.
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