Re: [求譯] 拜託大家幫我看看翻譯與文法有沒有錯?

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※ 引述《kenkoso (ken)》之銘言： : 求英譯：中譯英 : 屬段落： : 神經肌肉電刺激在臨床上被許多物理治療師所使用在治療水腫的改善、促進血液循環、新 : 陳代謝、疼痛減輕和傷口的修復等等。市面上許多電刺激器產品都是說明有所功效的，卻 : 沒有給使用者在刺激時一個客觀療效的指標。本研究主要是建構一個可攜式可程式化低頻 : 電刺激與阻抗量測裝置，在電刺激前後分別做0.1~500Hz多頻率阻抗量測，取得刺激前後 : 阻抗與相位的資訊，了解電刺激對皮膚肌肉組織的變化，是否在刺激後皮膚阻抗有較大的 : 差異。 : Neuromuscular electrical stimulation on clinical has been used by many ^^^^^^^^形容詞沒名詞 : physical therapists to treat dropsy's improvement, promote blood circulation ^^^^^----------^^^^^^^^^^^ 改善的東西不必治療 : and metabolism, alleviate pain, repair wound…etc. In the market, many woundS : electrical stimulators has been claimed their effect, but has not given an ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 被動語態不對 ^^^ 主詞為複數 : objective explanation of electricity stimulation curative effect to users. : This objective is to develop a portable , programmable, low frequency ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^這個目標? : electrical stimulators and the impedance measuring device, measure the a portable...stimulatorS and THE 都是問題 : impedance in the frequency of 0.1~500Hz during electrical stimulation, : according to the magnitude and the phase of the impedance to analysis the ^^^^^^^^^^^也不對 : change of tissue impedance after electrical stimulation. 以上完全僅看英文，我沒對照中文校稿 : 本系統使用MSP430f149單晶片為核心，控制周邊電刺激電路與擷取、記錄阻抗變化資料， : 其內部AD模組將阻抗資料數位化，儲存至FLASH記憶體，並藉由USB通訊傳輸介面將資料傳 : 至電腦端並於電腦端作進一步處理、分析(如阻抗雜訊濾除及計算出阻抗值與相位值)。電 : 刺激電流範圍0.3~3mA，刺激頻率0.1Hz~10Khz。系統平台可直接由電腦端USB供電或鋰電 : 池(3V~5V)供電，平均消耗電流約145mA，平均消耗功率為約0.5W。 : 此外本裝置在十位受測者中在刺激時量測即時阻抗的變化，在刺激前後量測0.1Hz~500Hz : 阻抗的變化，十位受測者在各頻率阻抗都呈現降低的現象，代表電刺激對於皮膚肌肉組織 : 是有作用。這項阻抗變化的指標對於電刺激會增加血液循環或者新陳代謝可望提供了客觀 : 電刺激療效的解釋。 : 我的試譯： : This system was using a microprocessor ( MSP430f149 ) to realize prototyping. ^^^^^^^^^時態有誤 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 用字不搭配 : The device were including (1) controls peripheral electric circuit of ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^ 單複數、時態都有誤又一個動詞? 贅字 : electrical stimulation (2) internal A/D module translates the data to digital : (3) a flash memory system to record a change of impedance during electrical : stimulation (4) after all processes had been done on platform, the data could ^^^^這裡要另起新句 : be conveyed to computer by USB for further analyses ( such as the noise : filter of impedance and calculate the magnitude and the phase of the : impedance ) .The current range of electrical stimulation is 0.3~3mA and the : frequency range is 0.1Hz~10kHz. The system platform can be supply power by ^^^^^^^^^ 被動語態用錯 : USB or lithium battery (3V~5V) and the average current consumption is : approximately 145mA, the average power consumption is approximately 0.5W. : In this system, experiment ten subjects by measuring the change of impedance ^^^^^^^^^^位置錯誤 : during electrical stimulation, the impedance in the 0.1Hz~500Hz frequency : range of ten subjects is decrease after electrical stimulation. Thus, it ^^^^^^^^^^^這是什麼時態 the impedance...of ten subjects也要改 : shows that the electrical stimulation is useful to the skin tissue. This : change of impedance could indicate that electrical stimulation can increase : the blood circulation or metabolism and provide the objective explanation of ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^兩詞位置要互換 : electrical stimulation curative effect. : 提問：不知道有沒有文法的錯誤、辭彙的錯誤或是大意上有錯 ? 謝謝大家..拜託了還有許多我懶得註的小錯... 我還沒對照中文呢 -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.166.3.190