[文法] 請問這個句子的文法正確嗎?

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (自由、民主、法治的台灣)時間15年前 (2010/12/18 08:57), 編輯推噓1(101)
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這個句子外國編輯寫成這樣 The XXX School located in Houston, Texas, is one of the most important legal centers in the United States. 我想改寫成這樣 The OOO School located in Delaware, which is one of the most important legal centers for the corporation law in the United States. 還是我應該寫成 The OOO School located in Delaware, is one of the most important legal centers for the corporation law in the United States. 但怎樣都感覺很奇怪 請版上高手指教一下那個才對 感謝 -- 台灣要朝邁向自由民主的法治社會努力 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.192.158.224

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上句的which會變成補述Delaware
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下句去掉逗點,就是你要的句子
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