[文法] 201608空中英語教室批改作文

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者scju (QQ)時間9年前 (2016/08/13 11:47)推噓1(1推 0噓 21→)

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各位好，請教這一期201608空中英語教室批改作文的部分。 #表示編輯認為應刪去 []表示應加上 How English Has Changed My Life That is the question. When I was young and naive, teachers and my parents always told me that English was very important, whether in #the# normal life or in the future. Thus, I started learning English when I was just about five #and#[or] six years old. I thought it was tough and boring at first, but gradually, I found that learning English #is#[was] not that bad, actually it was quite interesting! Since then, going to language school became the most exciting thing #in# every single day, and I like[d] my classmates and teachers so much#,#[.] #t#[T]here #are#[were] also lots of fun activities, which I always enjoyed a lot. Getting older and more mature, my class level was getting higher and higher too. Now, I can't say my English is the best in [the] class, but I can [be] sure that my English is definitely not poor. Although I #had#[have] stopped going to language school #anymore# now, #however,# I still read many English articles and magazines, like SparkNotes, Studio Classroom etc. And I believe, in my future life, English will truly help me and make me successful. ------ 1.That is the question在這裡是什麼意思？（譯：這就是那個問題？） 2.第四行這句：I thought it was tough and boring...it was quite interesting! 架構是A, but B, C 想問的是，我以為連接詞只有：「A 連接詞 B」。也能寫成：「A 連接詞 B, C」這種形式嗎？所以一個連接詞前後能接到三句，還可以再加嗎？ 3.Getting older and more mature, my class level was getting higher and higher too. 這句我的理解是，前半部是分詞構句，但這樣前後主詞不就不一致，變成懸吊句了？ When I got older and more mature, my class level was getting higher.... 以上請教，謝謝！ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.160.80.132 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1471060051.A.30F.html ※ 編輯: scju (1.160.80.132), 08/13/2016 12:28:46

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