[SHARE] A COMPOSITION EXERCISE
I'ad go to writing classes in GVO this summer vacation that wrote several
compositions. And, I would like to post one of them here, to improve my typing
speed as well as my English. I 'm a freshman in college just graduated from
high-school, if any structure or grammar problems occured, any corrections
or suggestions would be welcome !!!
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THE QUESTION:Choose between MONEY and WISDOM.Explain why.
As we all know, that there're two kinds of wealth existing in the world.
One is the normal money, while the other's more unattachable and more precious
-- the intelectual wealth. Yes, I prefer more wisdom in my brain than more
coins in my pocket or more figures in my bankaccount-book. You may think that
I would say so because I'm still young, or not mature enough to act. Maybe.
But here is my opinion toward this issue.
Everyone loves money, it's indeed a useful and necessary tool to live on.
But, when it comes to the comparison between money and wisdom, the latter
will show it's necessity in the long run. No money? Earn it! But lack of inner
soul? It would be more difficult to gain it. Read more books? Take more protein
? Eat more animals' brains? I don't think they really work, to tell the truth.
Besides, having intelligence can earn money, yet money can't buy wisdom !!!!!!!!
So, it's very easy to see why so many philosophers, thinkers, and writers
take prior in wisdom than money. Last but not least, I would like to end this
writing with a smart saying, "Wealthy people spend money, while intelligent
people earn them !!!!!!!!!!!"
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PS. It's a composition just like the ones we usually wrote in high-school,with
just a few 20 minutes or so. In order to keep it's original appearance, I
just type it here without much correction. Sorry to show my poor writing
ability here---I must say that again here!!!!!!1
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▓ ▓ By GENIUS-SHENG ( shgenius )
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