[Ask ] would u plz help me to check out this

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (盛)時間19年前 (2006/07/12 02:55), 編輯推噓1(100)
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this is the Autobiography of my sister's biographic sketch would u plz help me to check out this I was born in a nuclear family. My father is an officer, he always teach me strictly and tell me do the thing as well as I can. When I have some problem he would only say 「Don't try to cop out something that you did. You should find a way to solve it. 」 I take a lot of credit about food and I find I’m interesting in research and create a new thing. I want to learn more, I joined the senior’s class when I was a junior, because I want learn morn about the food. Knowledge is not only in the teaching-book, so I got different kind of part-time job and joined the Student Club. These experiences made me grew up. If I work for you, I will bring my heart to learn everything and be a responsible staff. I know there's something wrong somewhere but just don't know how to fix it -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 125.232.67.14

07/12 19:33, , 1F
U can type in a word file to correct your grammar 1st
07/12 19:33, 1F
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