Re: [Ask ] Correct my biography HELP!

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※ 引述《sangola (非想非非想處天)》之銘言： : I am looking for a job which is concerning about internaional agent. : plz give my biograyphy any comments or advices. Thank you. : My name is Martin who was born on July 27, 1980 in Fengyuan City where is : located in the middle of Taiwan. There are four members in my family. My : parents are running their own gas stations. Both of them are very : hard-working businessman. My young sister is pursuing her master degree in younger sister 妹妹 Master's degree 碩士 (why don't you ask her for help?) : the medical school. I grow up in a well-fixed family. My characters are : enthusiastic, active and thirst for new knowledge and skills. I feel I am the : luckiest man in the world because every time when the difficulties come : toward me, I always can turn the corner. : I graduated from York University in the city of Toronto, Canada. During the : undergraduate program at such beautiful and advanced country, I have met lots : of international friends, toured the east coast of Canada and learned the : knowledge and culture of North American. In addition, I have found myself a : sensitive penetration of financial investment. For example, I discovered the : industrial-computer has fully of potential at the time, I bet my whole chips industrial computer full of : and obtained 25% profit form Taiwan stock market in 2005. Sometime I feel : like I might conceal the blood of gambler in my body. : Beside the investment, computer is the only stuff can attract my attention. : Since my high school life, I have read lots of issues about computer parts. : The computer malls were also my favorite places to visit. Most of my friends : would ask my assistance when they need to buy a new computer or get problems ask for : from their PCs. Unfortunately, I was failed to apply computer science in the failed to : York University due to the high strict and outstanding requirements. However, : I have never had regrets about that, I still acquire the precious knowledge : and find my interest in financial field form economics department. Thanks for : the classmates and professors who took care me at that time, that makes me of me : realize no people can survive by his own, cooperation is the only key to on his own : build our glorious victory. : After I came back Taiwan, I accepted an offer form the Jordan language from??? : school. To be a English teacher, I have to manage the whole class and bear an : the responsibility of every kid’s study. I was not a sophisticated person, : so sometime the children make me so frustrated. In there, I recognize patient patience : is the touchstone of communication. After the work, I normally would do the : reading at night. The Chinese idiom says, Studying is like rowing a boat on : the river, you only can go forward or backward. Despite the Internet has : provided any kind of information to us, it only tells us the story not the for : knowledge. Nobody could practice a surgery after he visit a medical web-site. visiting : I believe reading is the most effective way to acquire knowledge except go to ,besides attending : college. On the other hand, books not only bring you new concepts but also : help people solve the problems we are facing in time. : Finally, I would like to state my future expectation. I am going to start my : first decade of career after finishing the one and half year alternative one and a half : service. I hope my foreign language skill and financial specialty could : provide a little help to your company, I would keep open-mind to learn and I open-minded learning : everything concerned with work and showing the best I can do, then we can show : create a double-win situation and the future success. Win-Win Try this and you can go "Eng-Class" board for further helps -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.184.80.249