Re: [Idea] Give me some suggest about my article

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者ducktiger (老卡三)時間17年前 (2008/05/17 22:35)推噓0(0推 0噓 1→)

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※ 引述《freeman18 (Treasure)》之銘言： : firstly : thanks to browns that me make a lot of friends from different : countries. Firstly, I'd like to thank Browns which helps me make a lot of friends from different countries. : during school life,i have learnt many things~ : including english skill, : even i have studies in browns just 2 months, : but it has already be a great experience in my memory During my school life, I learned many things, such as basic English abilities. Even though I have studied in Browns for only two months, this period of time has been precious part of my memory. : secondly : to all my friends : every moment spent with you is a moment I treasure : our life cant always be full of happiness : but it can always be full of love : everything that happens,happens for a reason : if u feel sad.lonely or bored... : and u want to talk to someone, : please think of me Secondly, to all my friends, I do treasure every moment I spent with you. Life cannot always be full of happiness, but can be full of love. I believe everything happens for a reason. If you feel sad, lonely, bored, or need someone to talk to, please don't hesitate to let me know. : lastly : i hope i can meet all of you again : in the corner of world : thanks my friends who always cared about to me : thank you who always told me that i must study english hard : thank you who had a parties with me : and everything you did for me : i am Freeman,i graduate already! Finally, I wish to see all of you again soon. I'd like to thank those who are always there to care about me, those who never forget to remind me of the importance of English, and those who threw parties for me. I really appreciate all of the things you have done for me. Now, I am graduated, and I am free! Welllllll, you really need to improve your grammar and spelling...^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 219.81.160.8 ※ 編輯: ducktiger 來自: 219.81.160.8 (05/17 22:36)