[Ask ] Inspiration Emergency

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (達西太太)時間17年前 (2008/05/25 22:04), 編輯推噓2(204)
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Dear friends on EngTalk, Oh....I need inspiration really bad. There's an essay on natural disaster which should be turned in this Wednesday morning. I want to write about earthquakes in Taiwan. But that is jsut a vague idea. I must have a specific thesis statement. Somebody help me develope it, please> < There should be five paragraphs: introduction, 3 developmental paragraphs and conclusion. for the introduction part, I think I'll have a funnel start, talking about all natural disasters then focus on earthquakes in Taiwan. as to the conclusion, I want to remind people that we can't avoid earthquakes but we can decrease the casualty. and there are still 3 paragraphs left. What am I going to do??? Come to me, inspiration! O Muse, sing for me the ideas for this essay. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.167.204.217

05/25 22:26, , 1F
start from the actual hazards and how it shapes
05/25 22:26, 1F

05/25 22:27, , 2F
our daily life (passively), then describe it
05/25 22:27, 2F

05/25 22:33, , 3F
so u mean, forget about the funnel start and use
05/25 22:33, 3F

05/25 22:33, , 4F
dramatic start instead?
05/25 22:33, 4F

05/25 22:34, , 5F
nah, that'd be my start. Think of it as an add-on
05/25 22:34, 5F

05/25 23:28, , 6F
I see.
05/25 23:28, 6F
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