Re: [Ask ] About self-introduction

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※ 引述《gallonpower (發呆中...)》之銘言： : Hi everyone : I just written a self-introduction maybe : use for interviewing in the company. : Hope you can give me some advice to make my article look better. : I really appriciate all your help. : ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- : First of all thanks for interviewing me today. First of all, thank you for taking the time to interview me. : I am going to do self-introduction. (I don't think the above line is needed.) : I am XXX, a 26 years old person who lives in Taipei. My name is XXX, I'm 26 years old this year and I live in Taipei. : I was major in Chemistry, graduated from XX university : and has worked as a research assistant in the same lab one years ago. I graduated from XX University, majoring in Chemistry. I worked as a research assistant in the same lab (<--something wrong here. There is no mention of any lab in the above lines.) one year ago. : During this one year, the content of my work includes performing : the lab's plans, helping the underclassmen to solve the problem : on experience and making movie about experience. During my stint at the lab, the work I was assigned include performing the lab's plans(<-- sth wrong here too. What do you mean by 'performing the lab's plans'?), helping undergraduates gain more experience and making a movie about their experience. : In addition, I used my spare time to take several classes : about computer、English、patent. In addition, I took several classes regarding Computering, English and Patenting in my spare time. : It is the one of several advantages to work in XX university : due to its abundant resource. This is one of several advantages of working in XX University, which has abundant resources. : However, to be honesty, this job for me is a little easy : and lacking of challenge. Unfortunately, I found the job too simple and lacking in challenges. : I like the place of my work but it is enough to stay for one year. I liked my workplace, but I felt that working for a year there is enough. : Now I am looking forward to working in a better learning environment. : I think I am a responsible、optimistic person , : regardless of in working or in privacy. I am a responsible and optimistic person, whether I am at work or at home.(Don't say 'I think'. Be confident. Show that you know yourself.) : Therefore, if I have a chance to work for your company : I will work hard with modesty and fidelity. Thank you. -- In classical mythology, Dionysus or Dionysos is the god of wine, the inspirer of ritual madness and ecstasy, and a major figure of Greek mythology, and one of the twelve Olympians, among whom Greek mythology treated as a late arrival. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 121.6.64.35