[Ask ] Could you help me to check my article?

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I wrote a cover letter for aplying for a job, but I am not sure if all the grammar are correct. Could you help me to check it? Dear Ms. Jill XXX I am highly interested in a position of HR assistant advertised in XXX. I have enclosed my resume with this letter which will emphasize my knowledge to perform this job efficiently. My skills and qualifications are in line with the demands stated in your job description. For instance, I am extremely good at doing integration, maintaining documents and making arrangements which I deem are the most significant functions of an assistant. When I was a student, I always held activities. Planning and execution are not a big deal to me. Furthermore, I worked in a chain restaurant for almost two years, so I believe that I have a good ability to deal with my own emotions and service customers. I take pride in my capability to anticipate what a customer wants before he or she verbalizes it. Besides, I learned how to assist on administration from the job. I have a bachelor’s degree in psychology. During this period of time, I was a volunteer in a children's home. I am sure that I am willing to help people. I can be reached at the 0986XXXXXX or niXXXXXXX@gmail.com. Thank you for your reading my cover letter and consideration. I look forward to having an interview with you. Sincerely, kameaki5566 Enc.Resume -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 49.159.21.96