[Ask ] Could anyone help me to correct my tex
Hi everyone, I am new here.
Recently due to some reasons, I need to refresh my English.
So I try to write one short text every day.
Honestly it's hard to write correct without online-grammar-check or online-dictionary.
Yet practice, maybe don't make perfect so soon, but makes helpful at least.
Let's talk about my short text, here we are:
In my opinion, I would totally agree with that. We should limit the time, to
control the children under 12 not to be addicted to social media or internet.
Nowadays many parents hire technological babysitter to look after their
children. This is to say, they play video on tablet and let their children
watch this technological device all day. Then again, it's not health for
childhood. For instance, after playing video games or watching films long
time, it's hard to focus on static activity, such as reading books or
chatting with friends face to face. Because their concentration are already
damaged. Moreover, accompanied usage of the internet is as well as necessary.
We can find various information over internet. Yet, the children can not
judge what kind of information, which they indeed need or are harmless. In
order to avoid this situation at all costs, therefore parents play the
important role to teach their children by accompany. Above all, it seems to
be better, if the children do not start early to use technological devices.
Then, I wont say enjoy that. I know this is kind of disaster.
I hope it's still readable. Thank a lot :)
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