[語文] PP2-223

看板GMAT (GMAT入學考試)作者 (GMAT)時間17年前 (2009/01/14 00:37), 編輯推噓2(206)
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After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to doctors and hospitals. A. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to B. while it then proved unable to handle the increase in business and fell months behind in its payment to E. but then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying 答案是E 想請教一下AB是錯在哪邊呢? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 203.73.57.187

01/14 08:10, , 1F
it 出問題嗎?! 我認為啦
01/14 08:10, 1F

01/14 20:36, , 2F
it指代不清..
01/14 20:36, 2F

01/15 14:30, , 3F
1)while引導的是從屬子句,表示其為次要,不甚合句義
01/15 14:30, 3F

01/15 14:32, , 4F
2)AB較不簡潔 ("in its payment to" vs "in paying")
01/15 14:32, 4F

01/15 14:33, , 5F
3)老莫: 代名詞當主詞,優先代替原句主詞
01/15 14:33, 5F

01/15 14:35, , 6F
故AB用it勉強說得過去, 但E避用it使句義更清楚, 故較佳
01/15 14:35, 6F

01/15 14:36, , 7F
結論: AB沒有大錯, 只是E更好, 所以選E
01/15 14:36, 7F

01/15 21:36, , 8F
謝謝樓上諸位大大,感激不盡!:)
01/15 21:36, 8F
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