[寫作班] 托福第14週 yihuan, 2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a
more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In today's world, in most of country, everybody must go to school to
receive some basic educations. Although we spent more time accompanying
with our classmates than our parents, nevertheless, actually parents
have more influence than our classmates. The issue of problem solving
and moral behavior illustrate why it is so.
To begin with, the classmates in school come from different families,
every level of the society. So the value judgment is definite different
among us and classmates. Our classmates' opinions are sometimes useless
for us, because we have totally different basic concept. When we face
some problems in school, our parents' ideas might be the best answer for
us. The reason is that our parent would think the problems more serious
than our classmates and they know us more. Everybody would face an important
problem what is your major in university. However your classmates' ideas
are absolutely useless for you, because your background are different,
your focus might be different. In that time, your parents will be your
best consultants. Sometimes we would face some learning problems, but
those are not only learning ability problems, those might be the mental
problems. Those problems could cause some obstructions of your success
in school, your parents would be the best doctors of those problem. In
fact is that your parents would willing to spent more time taking care
you, and give your some similar experiences which they ever had in
their student period. Although we always define the success that is
your grades, but actually how to solve those problems and obstructions
is more important. If you could solve the problems, you also cannot attain
the success. However our parents have more helps than our classmates.
Additionally, our success in school shouldn't just focus on our grades,
because our moral behaviors are more important. How to help a student
developing to a well-behavior student is the most important duty of a
school. However, we sometimes would be influenced by our classmates to
do some immoral or inappropriate action, for example: drinking or smoking
under the legal ages and skipping class. In this case, we would be far
away the success of school; our classmates are harmful rather than helpful
in our process of success. On the other hand, our parents always teach
us what action is appropriate or nice, and they encourage us to do that.
In most of time, our parents are really helpful for our actions and
attitudes. They would give us appropriate advices in the appropriate timing.
In conclusion, our classmates are not adequate to help us to attain success
in the school; however, our parents are definitely able to give us nice
advices and helps for our success. If we always only listen to our
classmates' opinions and ideas, we would lose some really important advices
and admonishments of our achievement.
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