[寫作班] 托福第16週, dwings, 3

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (夜空的精靈)時間16年前 (2008/07/09 09:25), 編輯推噓0(005)
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3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. In my opinion, it should depend on the students' personality, fondness and what they want to learn. It was said: "All roads lead to Rome." There should be the same knowledge to teach students among the schools. However, students will learn different things form their peers. There are numerous reasons why I support this argument, and I will mention the most important ones below. When boys and girls attend separate schools, they have to learn how to live without another gender. They can develop their ability without stereotype for sex. For example, when I was a senior high school student, I attended to a girl school. That was my first time to do some job that used to be done by boys, such as a leader in physical education class. Most important of all, I learned that there are nothing could be restrained by gender. I could do better than boys if I made enough efforts. What I got in that period encouraged me to be a confident and independent person. On the other hand, students attend a school with boys and girls have to learn how to interact and respect others. Students can broaden their minds, and even change their views through appreciating others. Moreover, they will know how to get along with different kinds of people. For example, when I was a college students, I took a part-time job to instruct a club in a junior high school with co-education. I found that students had much more understanding about another gender than my classmates in the senior high schools. Therefore, I think that students will learn more social skills when they attend to a coeducational school. On balance, I think whether boys and girls attend separate schools or not, they get something from their classmates. As a result, it is better that students can pick the schools that they want to learn besides the academic subjects. 這次來得及寫結論 不過有點虛....>.<: -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.110.193 ※ 編輯: dwings 來自: 140.112.110.193 (07/09 09:26)

07/09 17:29, , 1F
第一段應該要把立場表明的更清楚
07/09 17:29, 1F

07/09 17:30, , 2F
最後一句...是要說學生可以自己選學校嗎?
07/09 17:30, 2F

07/09 17:31, , 3F
整篇看下來,還是看不出你要support的是哪個argument
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07/09 20:39, , 4F
的確 結論不夠強烈 我會再想想怎麼立論比較好
07/09 20:39, 4F

07/09 20:40, , 5F
謝謝你的指正...:)
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