[寫作班] 托福第25週 dwings 2
2.Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that
people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to
support your opinion.
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When people are troubled about some problems, some would make decisions
quickly to avoid missing the key moment. However, others would like to think
more rationally and consider the situation. In my opinion, I would prefer the
latter one to find the proper decision rather than make my mind immediately.
There are numerous reasons why I choose this argument, and I will propose some
important ones here.
To begin with, although it goes that: "Time is money", it would be more
dangerous if people jump into the conclusion. Without enough information,
people may reason irrationally and oversimplify the whole thing, then make a
hasty choice. Therefore, people should search complete evidence and understand
the real situation, so they could reach the right conclusions.
In addition, through careful thought, people can make the more suitable
and proper decision. Furthermore, it would be better to evaluate the strengths
and weakness before the judgment. For example, when I graduated from the
college, I had to choose which graduate school I should attend. There are two
options. One is more research-oriented university, which has more famous
professors and research resources; another graduate school has a lot of
practical lessons and summer-intern programs that help students experience the
real world. Finally, I chose the former one because I wanted to advance my
study. During that period, if I made the decision too quickly, I might change
my career path overly. Therefore, it would be adequate to decide anything after
thinking a lot.
To sum up, understanding the possibility of opportunity and risk will help
people to response more correctly. Although it would spend more time on judging
things, take a close look, as long as people pay enough attention, it brings
more benefits than harm that making choice carefully. Consequently, I would
suggest people to do after thinking more.
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