[閒聊] 想把這段英文再修改得更精簡些

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (壞龍斌)時間14年前 (2010/07/26 19:58), 編輯推噓1(101)
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我喜歡旅遊挑戰不同工作而累積不少知識跟經驗,使我有寬闊的胸襟與有特色的個人風格, 以在遇到不同事情以不同角度來解決所面臨的議題。 我待人和善開朗幽默,對上司忠心,主動協助工作團隊完成重要事務, I enjoy traveling and meeting different types of people, challenging myself with various kinds of jobs, and in doing so, I extended my knowledge and experience. The different knowledge from different places built me to become an open-minded person that I can handle various complicated issues in different means! I am kindhearted, humorous and loyal to the chief. I am easy-going and nice to people. 想把這段英文再修改得更精簡些,有沒有高手能撥空給點建議呢? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.129.124.229 ※ 編輯: Government 來自: 220.129.124.229 (07/26 20:00)

07/26 23:08, , 1F
你的中文跟英文對不起來,中文也不順,建議先把中文順過吧
07/26 23:08, 1F

07/26 23:55, , 2F
+1 中文有些拗口生硬,建議先修改
07/26 23:55, 2F
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