[履歷]新鮮人自傳幫批 科技sales

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背景:國立EE學士 英文:精通 應徵:科技業sales --------------------------------------------------------- [求學過程]: 就讀電機系期間,主修電子電路,另涉獵控制系統、MATLAB與C++。擔任喜劇專題選修 課 程小組討論組長,負責規劃與執行,展現溝通表達與組織領導特質,在時程內確實掌握專 案進度,報告結果得到老師的肯定。 [活動經驗]: 於扶輪社擔任關懷弱勢志工,以健行方式於社區陌生開發並成功募得五千元款項,用實 際 行動成功向社區民眾傳達“我走路、你贊助,一起做好事”的活動精神與意義。 於義工隊擔任營隊器材組長,負責以下工作事項,獲得豐富的團隊合作經驗: 1. 點收器材與餐點 2. 行程規劃 3. 統籌各方意見 4. 小組決策 5. 窗口協調 6. 人力資源調度 7. 主持小組會議 8. 組織並排練活動流程 [工作經驗]: 負責倉儲管理 工作內容為訂貨、進貨、銷貨 推廣店鋪產品、開發客源、第一線前台顧客服務 實習期間因確實掌握產品優點,加上了解客戶需求,成功達成可觀的交易數量。 [未來規劃]: 從社團與工作經驗中,了解個人深具團隊合作、善於溝通、統籌等特質。 短期將以培養人脈與社交能力為目標,進而往管理階層邁進。 針對業務職務以及其工作內容,我將以謙虛、樂於學習的態度,善於解決問題的邏輯概 念為公司服務。 [Studying process]: I graduated from Department of Electrical Engineering in NUU.I learned some basic principles and applications of electricity and some lessons such as C++,MATLAB,etc. [Activities]: I joined Show Love in the school life.It’s a national team camp,in which the students participated in some community care activities.I learned many things from that camp experience,such as cooperation,discussion and association,etc.Planning activities has to consider any kind of situations.I had many feedback such as finding,analyzing errors and fixing it during the preparations.Through the camp,I learned that“No pain,no gain”. [Work Experience]: When I was a student,I took a part-time job as service.I worked hard and learned how to treat with people.Mistakes do not matter,the most important thing is to learn from mistakes,and correct the errors.The importance is to love your job,and find the enthusiasm in your work,then acquire achievements. [Self-career Planning and Expectations]: Since English is a crucial ability to study those professional knowledge,so I will spend quite a lot of time to study English.I will read magazines to enhance strength and international outlook,I hope I could be an international worker in the future.With professional skills and language ability,I can communicate with people from different countries. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 111.253.230.111 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1467214017.A.431.html

06/29 23:38, , 1F
不錯
06/29 23:38, 1F

06/29 23:41, , 2F
求學經驗可以再寫一段,其他還不錯
06/29 23:41, 2F

06/29 23:56, , 3F
你的英文待加強
06/29 23:56, 3F

06/30 00:10, , 4F
英文不行;建議改成條列式藏拙
06/30 00:10, 4F

06/30 00:14, , 5F
這英文別寫精通比較好...Y
06/30 00:14, 5F

06/30 00:14, , 6F
英文自傳要修改,多用linking words,一直用I開頭的句子
06/30 00:14, 6F

06/30 00:14, , 7F
很像小學生寫的。
06/30 00:14, 7F

06/30 00:43, , 8F
英文不要寫精通,寫中等就好
06/30 00:43, 8F

06/30 00:47, , 9F
career plan很像是高中生apply大學時寫的內容 建議用精
06/30 00:47, 9F

06/30 00:47, , 10F
簡且具體的句子如: Achieving 900+ in TOIEC, Maintain
06/30 00:47, 10F

06/30 00:47, , 11F
ing current customers accounts, Sales increase for a
06/30 00:47, 11F

06/30 00:47, , 12F
vg. 10% of each account...
06/30 00:47, 12F
好的,我會再修改的,感謝大家建議 ※ 編輯: tom203701 (110.26.12.247), 06/30/2016 01:08:04

06/30 01:32, , 13F
精通?哪裡來的自信?聽說讀寫都ok嗎
06/30 01:32, 13F

06/30 10:10, , 14F
這英文...還是別說精通吧
06/30 10:10, 14F

06/30 11:19, , 15F
spend 後面接動詞應該是加v-ing不是用to v
06/30 11:19, 15F

06/30 11:56, , 16F
英文太多I開頭了
06/30 11:56, 16F
英文自傳部分我會再加強的,謝謝大家建議 ※ 編輯: tom203701 (110.26.12.247), 06/30/2016 12:40:19

06/30 12:54, , 17F
I've joined, i've learned 太多I開頭
06/30 12:54, 17F

06/30 15:44, , 18F
嗯 點收器材和餐點 可以進科技業不輪班的 51k
06/30 15:44, 18F

07/01 13:55, , 19F
英文精通
07/01 13:55, 19F

07/02 02:10, , 20F
是我就寫精通 管他勒XD
07/02 02:10, 20F

09/02 06:44, , 21F
at uni. not in uni.
09/02 06:44, 21F
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