Re: [請益] 有一題口說...

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者lenaky (Lena老師)時間16年前 (2010/04/02 14:22)推噓2(2推 0噓 0→)

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本篇回答結構Good 先開宗明義給一個答案 "portrait" 再給原因，然後敘述細節只是有一些文法用字和時態需修改一下 ※ 引述《think12381 ()》之銘言： : ※ 引述《paupaulon (prepare for..)》之銘言： : : describe a piece of arts that is imporant to you. : : 很抱歉~~ 我實在想不出來了 : : 希望可以有人幫我一下! :( : : 感激不盡!! : 我想我會這樣回答 : The most important art is the portrait that is created by my mother. ^^^^^ ^^ piece of art (因art不可數) was : It is important for me because that is my birthday present at 18. ^^ was : The portrait depicts my father. He is a honor, courageous person. ^^^^^^^ an honorable : For one thing, my mother told me. : when my farther was child, he picked up a bag including much money. ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ a child found which contained a lot of : He send the bag to police office. he is so honor. ^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^ took the police office was so honorable (honest可能更好) : For another thing, : when he was youth, he saw a man who was so strong kicking his friend. ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ young a very strong man who was : He stopped the man's behavior. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (字彙搭配問題，behavior前不會接stop) stood up against the man and told him to stop doing that. : He is courageous because he is so thin. ^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ was even though he was : For these reasons, The portrait symbolizes honor and courage. : That's why the portrait is important for me. : 11句時間內應該講的完不然可以在刪個幾句 : 這樣答的好處剛好和 : Describe the characteristics of a good teacher. Please state with specific : examples and details. : Who is the person you admire the most? Please give specific details and : examples in your explanation. : 可以共用一個答案 : 有錯請指教摟 -- -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 59.104.34.8 ※ 編輯: lenaky 來自: 59.104.34.8 (04/02 14:23)