[請益] 想請大家幫忙看一下我的作文

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者AlpacaGoGoGo (大米)時間14年前 (2011/11/13 02:06)推噓2(2推 0噓 8→)

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我的作文寫到線沒什麼機會給人改想麻煩大家幫我看一下這樣寫O不OK 我在30分鐘寫完但其中留了不少錯字語文法問題但想問大家我這樣寫大方向可不可以? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use special examples to support your answer. All we have to wear clothes everyday. Many people wear different clothes each day. And, we usually dress differently in differnt situations. Personally, I believe that people' behavior change while they are in different clothes. First of all, we behave differently due to the special charactoristic of a clothe. Some clothes allow people do things elegently and some clothes let people do things easily. For example, while I am in a sports clothe, I walk faster and I am willing to do things require more power, such as movine some heavy things, because the clothe is lighter and make it easy for me to move my body. There are different propose for those clothes. Furthermore, we have different behaviors owing to the value of clothes. If I buy a expensive clothe, I will definitly behave carefully when I wear it because I don't want to split it or make it dirty. On the other hand, if I am in a cheap clothe, which I don't really treasure , I will do things more casually. For instance, when I wear a Hang Ten T-shirt , I play basketball or go jogging. Nevertheless, when I wear a Rageblue suit, I will go to library or have dinner with friends only. Last but not least, we behave differently because the clothe sometimes means some thing to us. Take myself for examply, the suit of my senior high school reminds me to be a diligent student and everyone prespect me ,too. Hence, I always force myself contrate and study hard when I am in my suit and studying in a library. I am prode of this clothe. In conclusion, based on the statements above, I agree with the statement that clothes influence the way people behave. 292字 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.34.174.245