[書信] 寫給供應商的信

看板intltrade (國際貿易)作者 (suyoki)時間16年前 (2010/05/19 12:14), 編輯推噓2(2011)
留言13則, 4人參與, 最新討論串1/1
老闆叫我跟國外說信用狀要到期了,而核准續約會有一個禮拜到十天的工作天 要我請他們在到期日前把invoice給我先開狀以免會拖延到付款跟出貨時間,順便問 另一張訂單是否可以提早出貨.下面是我先試著寫的內容 麻煩大家囉!!! Dear K, Regarding to the contract with our bank about issuing L/C, the date of expire this year will be 8 June. To extend the contract, they need about 7-10 work days and at the same time, we can't arrange any L/C on 7 June to 17 June, or maybe longer. Therefore, please kindly send the invoice for A-100 in the end of May , also please let us know the current update on A-100(order name). We need those products for the up coming pets show. So, if A-101 can be ready and shipped at the same time with A-100, that would be great. Also, from now on, would you please scan the health certificate before you send it? 謝謝 :D -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.75.182.211

05/19 12:22, , 1F
如果沒解讀錯 是指銀行額度到期要續約? 假設如此 我的話就
05/19 12:22, 1F

05/19 12:23, , 2F
不會講這麼詳細 因為跟銀行的和約問題 X月X日前把INVOICE
05/19 12:23, 2F

05/19 12:25, , 3F
傳來 不然就6月月中之後才能開狀 基本上你的信沒問題 只是
05/19 12:25, 3F

05/19 12:26, , 4F
之前碰到客人差不多的情形 他只很帥氣的說 明天PI不來 那就
05/19 12:26, 4F

05/19 12:27, , 5F
下個月再開狀 而那時不過當月月初 原因? 客人懶得提啊 XD
05/19 12:27, 5F

05/19 13:26, , 6F
我也覺得信大致上OK~可是需要再更簡潔明瞭些~
05/19 13:26, 6F

05/19 13:28, , 7F
像1F的講法~就是直接切入要點很棒的建議~
05/19 13:28, 7F

05/19 16:32, , 8F
我也想 但老闆就這樣說了...但謝謝大家的意見:D
05/19 16:32, 8F

05/19 23:07, , 9F
借文偷推問問各位....大家寫信會很care文法跟修辭嗎....
05/19 23:07, 9F

05/19 23:07, , 10F
我主管就很愛挑這個點 硬要把我的文修掉說我寫的不好 事實
05/19 23:07, 10F

05/19 23:09, , 11F
是 我確定她寫的比我還糟= = 害我跟著她很愛一直修文把英文
05/19 23:09, 11F

05/19 23:11, , 12F
信努力修到完美 讓她無可挑剔 我先生說我主管很無聊 連帶的
05/19 23:11, 12F

05/19 23:12, , 13F
害我跟著耍笨 "英文信要寫那麼好 找個英文系的不就得了?"
05/19 23:12, 13F
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