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看板translator (翻譯接案)作者neile (neile)時間16年前 (2009/11/02 16:45)推噓2(2推 0噓 3→)

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A long time ago, there was a huge apple tree. A little boy loved to play around the tree everyday. He climbed to the tree top, ate the apples, took a nap under the shadow…He loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him. Time went by…the little boy had grown up and he no longer played around the tree everyday. One day, the boy returned. "Come and play with me ,"the tree said. "I don't have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Can you help me?" "Sorry, but I don't have a house .But you can cut my branches to build your house. "so the boy cut the branches and left happily. The tree was again lonely and sad. One hot summer day, the boy returned. "Come and play with me !"the tree said. "I am sad and getting old. I want to go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat?" "Use my truck to build your boat. You can sail faraway and be happy." So the boy cut the tree truck to make a boat and went sailing . Finally, the boy returned again. "Sorry, my boy. but I don't have anything for you anymore. No more apples for for you…「the tree said. "I don't have teeth to bite. "the boy replied. "No more truck for you to climb on." "I am too old for that now. "the boy said. "I really can give you anything…the only thing left is my dying root. "the tree said with tears. "I don't need much now, just a place to take a rest" the boy replied. "Come, come ,sit down with me and take a rest. "the boy sat down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears…… 可以請各位高手幫我看一下這一篇文章的文法或句子單字哪裡有問題嗎感激不盡 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.240.31.196