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看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (suyoki)時間14年前 (2010/03/03 16:22), 編輯推噓0(000)
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大家好 我幫我同事代po 他是廣電系的學生,想要用the ting tings 的歌當做背景音樂 並且想要取得公開撥放權 以下是文章內容 請幫我修改一下文法及不通順的地方 謝謝!!!! Dear The Ting Tings: We're students of ooo UNIVERSITY in Taiwan. We're shooting a film and plan to attend Asia student film Festival. I'd like to use your song ''Great DJ'' to be our roll-card background music. Our roll-card is different from others. It's very special and fantastic. As you know, roll-card is very important to give thanks to everyone who helped us.'' Great DJ '' will help our film to be perfect! We request you to give us the right to use '' Great DJ '' to be our roll-card background music. We promise our film will not do any commercial activity and sale. At last, our team hope you're able to give the rights of public release. Please contact with me. Thank you very much. Regards, -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.75.182.211
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文章代碼(AID): #1BZXnBgq (Eng-Class)